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Baptism: taking the plunge

 
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by: Joi West Level 1 3 months ago

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Sharon Alisa   Level 1Sharon Alisa 3 months ago Reply
 
Creative for sure, but I don't know if it is effective for baptism. The visual here feels more like something is draining instead of being immersed in water. Maybe think how you could better illustrate the concept while still incorporating the tagline "taking the plunge". Also give your words more breathing room. :)
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