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Forgiveness

 
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by: Marie Haggarty Level 1 2 years ago

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thanks to this tutorial -http://designinstruct.com/digital-art/create-a-grungy-scene-with-colorful-lights-in-photoshop/  what do you think?

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Sermon Illustraion

Target Audience

Sunday Congregation

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Mike Shea   Level 1Mike Shea 2 years ago Reply
 
Marie, I like this.

Two things:
1. Maybe reduce the size of FORGIVENESS.  It needs some breathing room.
2. The lines that are making the highlights seem like they should be behind the hands.

Just my 2 cents.  Hope it helps.

Blessings, Mike
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