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2 comments
I think you have the right idea. It just needs some tweaking. Here are some suggestions.
• lose the the right palm tree. The depth of field on it is kinda distracting.
• Remove the blur from the left palm tree.
• The servant leader type looks like its just floating. Maybe add some kind of element behind it (board, bamboo stick, leaf, etc...)
• Bring the graphic up some. It's close to the bottom and is getting cut off.
• lose the coconuts or try a different placement. They look kind of thrown in.
• Try making your torches look different. They have a copy and paste look.
Hoped that helped. Keep at it dude!
• lose the the right palm tree. The depth of field on it is kinda distracting.
• Remove the blur from the left palm tree.
• The servant leader type looks like its just floating. Maybe add some kind of element behind it (board, bamboo stick, leaf, etc...)
• Bring the graphic up some. It's close to the bottom and is getting cut off.
• lose the coconuts or try a different placement. They look kind of thrown in.
• Try making your torches look different. They have a copy and paste look.
Hoped that helped. Keep at it dude!
9 months ago
This is pretty awesome and would work great for a Back to School Luau we do every year for our Jr high ministry. Any chance this will be made available for download as psd?
