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mat vonEhrenkrook  

Parks and Wreck

 
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by: mat vonEhrenkrook Level 1 1 year ago

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Project

Student ministries summer prog

Website

www.ardentcommunity.com

Target Audience

Jr. High

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D B   Level 1D B 1 year ago Reply
 
Currently, it looks like the sign was centered, and then the transform tool was used and now it is closer to the edge on the left.

The sign has a lit of scratches, but there are none showing any green on the white text.

The background is very dark, and difficult to pick up, especially if this is going to be projected on a low quality 720/480 jr-high rm projector. With that in mind, I would honestly just scrap the bgd all together. A possible solution may be to put a sign post on it, and then out a park behind this sign blurred out so it has some DOF and adds depth to the picture.

The website looks very far from the sub-title. The can be moved closer vertically to each-ther.

I would also make sure your fonts on "parks and wreck" and the "every wednesday" are the same.
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