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Zach Lezniewicz  

Love Never Fails

 
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by: Zach Lezniewicz 9 months ago

Concept 1

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Project

New design for my campaign

Website

www.tragichopeapparel.com

Special Direction

Wanting thoughts on a new design for an ongoing campaign have to raise money for an orphanage in Ethiopia

Target Audience

Anyone

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2 comments

 
 
Marcus Williamson   Level 1Marcus Williamson 9 months ago Reply
 
Anyway you can space out the i and l a touch more? Just a thought. I'm dig'n the colors for ure though. 
Zach Lezniewicz   Zach Lezniewicz 9 months ago
 
Ya I see what you're sayin, thanks.
inPhocus Media   inPhocus Media 9 months ago Reply
 
At least from what I can tell the shirt says "Love never fails". At first glance it is hard to tell what fails actually says. As already commented you may want to make that more readable.

Also you mentioned that this is for an Ethiopian orphanage. You may want to add a contrasting paint splatter color (red, orange, etc) which is on where Ethiopia is located in Africa. Some people may not even know where it is.
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