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by: Rich Aguilar Level 1 1 year ago

 

Concept 2

alternate version with sleeves. haven't touched the title fonts yet... 

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Project

event poster

Special Direction

Youth, Big section of 20 churchs

Target Audience

Highschool age

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4 comments

 
 
Laura V   Level 1Laura V 1 year ago Reply
 
Awesome. You rock. I could so never pull off something like this, not just because I don't know how to use Cinema 4D...I'm not nearly gritty enough. :D 

I'd maybe pull the "sponsor" logos to align left with the type columns. I think having them centered makes them look a little random, pulling them into line would ground those really nice invisible grid lines you have going on with the red triangles and the white type. And maybe if possible shrink the "go" a tiny bit
Rich Aguilar   Level 1Rich Aguilar 1 year ago
 
Hey Laura!

To be honest, if there is something this guys struggles with on a constant basis. It is text/info layout! Man, I am always looking for resources to help me with it...

I do see your point. I will fix that asap. You were saying to left justify with the triangles or the text?

~ Rich
Rich Aguilar   Level 1Rich Aguilar 1 year ago
 
Oh, btw!

Thank you for the compliments! I really do appreciate them. You are a very talented artist... So, don't be so humble  !  ;)
Laura V   Level 1Laura V 1 year ago
 
haha! Thanks Rich :DI would justify the logos with the text, so you leave that little gutter between the triangle and the text. 
Langston Carr   Langston Carr 1 year ago Reply
 
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Langston Carr   Langston Carr 1 year ago Reply
 
Is there any way to download or purchase this item? Or possibly have it in a .psd file? BTW, Great work!
Michael Davis   Michael Davis 1 day ago Reply
 
Is there a way I can get a PSD of this? 
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