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I like this color scheme over the other. I would maybe look at inverting the "EST 1947" line so it is right side up.

The 2013 doesn't really seem to fit in for me (at least how it is presented here). You could maybe squeeze "WD YOUTH" enough to allow the 2013 with it. I don't really have any good suggestions on it.

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Rich Aguilar 10 months ago

Hey Blake,

Thanks for the tips. Unfortunately my client likes neither! :O
Here is what they are looking for. If I understand my client, they are wanting
something very similar to this:

https://mail-attachment.googleusercontent.com/attachment/u/0/?ui=2&ik=ca007c16f9&view=att&th=1393220ac8e5e6be&attid=0.1&disp=inline&safe=1&zw&saduie=AG9B_P8Ge-4SvYefl2kwYw4__HbH&sadet=1345214717658&sads=U0Mk1jcpZAP-lYlx4mzfDK3YN1o&sadssc=1" />

Rich Aguilar 10 months ago

Sheesh.. how come the HTML isn't working...

lol, what I was trying to say was, My client is ending up not wanting to use this version or the other.

They want something almost exactly like this link...
https://mail-attachment.googleusercontent.com/attachment/u/0/?ui=2&ik=ca007c16f9&view=att&th=1393220ac8e5e6be&attid=0.1&disp=inline&safe=1&zw&saduie=AG9B_P8Ge-4SvYefl2kwYw4__HbH&sadet=1345219516820&sads=LMJcr0t4oi-wLe57m459__40wxs

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Rich Aguilar Notes

BTW, I like the text suggestions!

Thanks for the input bro! :)

~Rich

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Sharon Alisa Notes

Hey Rich! I like this version a lot! The other one lacks depth and is a little hard to read. I agree with Blake about trying out the bottom text right side up. Only other thought is that the "D" in "WD" is very similar looking to the "O", but I like the font otherwise! Love the vintage feel overall.

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